I think that what you composed made a bunch of sense. However, what about this? what if you added a little content? I ain't suggesting your content isn't good., however what if you added a title to maybe grab people's attention? I mean BubbleUp Forum is kinda boring. You should peek at Yahoo's front page and watch how they create post headlines to get people to open the links. You might add a video or a related pic or two to grab readers interested about what you've written. Just my opinion, it might bring your posts a little livelier.
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